My previous storyline didn't show enough that the blimp was furtive and was told by Jackie to go back to my World War idea.
As I thought what I can do to show that my blimp is furtive. This idea came up.
The beginning starts at a city with search lights everywhere. The blimp comes in when the camera moves before looking down at the center of the city.
The middle starts when the blimp tries to escape from the city by hiding in various of places to avoid getting spotted by the searchlights. Getting a chance, the blimp heads into the sky and starts to hide from cloud to cloud.
The end starts when the blimp manages to escape the city. However, gets caught by one of the searchlights before getting blown to pieces.