not entirely sure about the 3rd act - it seems a bit brutal really - maybe you could have it so the blimp sneaks around, escapes the city... and just when it thinks it's escaped, one of your birds from your first story settles on top of it and gives it a peck! "Bang!"
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not entirely sure about the 3rd act - it seems a bit brutal really - maybe you could have it so the blimp sneaks around, escapes the city... and just when it thinks it's escaped, one of your birds from your first story settles on top of it and gives it a peck! "Bang!"
Okay, I shall do that then. =)
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