Hello! Good to see that you have started the drawings1 I am looking forward to your blimp coming to life... Just a couple of points about the London view....I think it would be good to hold the first establishing shot for a bit longer, so that the audience can recognise it as the London skyline - maybe have a searchlight panning across the sky, which would also place it in wartime? Also, it seems quite jumpy...you may need a few more frames inbetween (I think that's what would work - show Meg today and ask her advice!)
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Hello! Good to see that you have started the drawings1 I am looking forward to your blimp coming to life...
Just a couple of points about the London view....I think it would be good to hold the first establishing shot for a bit longer, so that the audience can recognise it as the London skyline - maybe have a searchlight panning across the sky, which would also place it in wartime? Also, it seems quite jumpy...you may need a few more frames inbetween (I think that's what would work - show Meg today and ask her advice!)
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