Indeed - well done, Naomi - this is a big, BIG improvement on your original submission. Unit 3 is history now, but I really want you to consider the reasons for the success of this image - and take that knowledge into your current project and beyond. You need to be your own quality and control, and you need to be much more ambitious. And Jackie is right - time to get cracking on Unit 4 - pronto!!!
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Wow Naomi this final piece is so much stronger and I like the mysterious light that sweeps into the dark space
Well Done :)
Looking much more atmospheric! :)
Time to get cracking on the current project!
Indeed - well done, Naomi - this is a big, BIG improvement on your original submission. Unit 3 is history now, but I really want you to consider the reasons for the success of this image - and take that knowledge into your current project and beyond. You need to be your own quality and control, and you need to be much more ambitious. And Jackie is right - time to get cracking on Unit 4 - pronto!!!
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