tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6512485033146678408.post533132445693184781..comments2023-08-10T08:35:51.820+01:00Comments on Naomi's Blog: Time Machine - Essay IntroductionAxilhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14153727572411516830noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6512485033146678408.post-29259082346964449792011-04-18T19:39:12.797+01:002011-04-18T19:39:12.797+01:00Hey Naomi - good to see you making a start, but th...Hey Naomi - good to see you making a start, but there is a BIG question at the heart of your introduction that you're not even dealing with yet - and it's vital that you do deal with it. What do you mean by 'Computer Arts'? Are you talking about computer graphics/digital painting/computers & fine art or what? The very FIRST thing your essay will need to do is be very clear about its definition of Computer Arts - what it means, what it doesn't mean. At the moment, you're using a big flabby phrase which means different things to different people - what do you mean by 'Computer Arts'? Give me a definition!tutorphilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11842833126210822641noreply@blogger.com